NEW CRIT SUGGESTION; The Szenzau !

Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:27 PM

IMAGE OF ALL STAGES; http://i50.tinypic.com/2n81fs.jpg

IMAGE PER STAGE; [I know its best to have one pic, but you can see the colours better in these;]

EGG; http://i46.tinypic.com/wtsxgo.jpg

1ST STAGE; http://i45.tinypic.com/70gqc7.jpg

FINAL STAGE; http://i47.tinypic.com/2i0cfhj.jpg

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-About Szenzau Eggs- (Edited)

Szenzau eggs are coated in a soft, velvet like fur that tingles when touched. There are strange rings and studs embedded into the fur of which colours resemble that of oil on water. There is a strange leather belt wound across the egg which is dotted with silver studs, similar to that of a dog's collar. These eggs are extremely heavy too, and almost have the weight of lead.

-More about the Szenzau- (Edited)

The Szenzau doesn't have any paws, and it seems as if the Szenzau's body is made of a dark energy like matter. It is impossible to pet a Szenzau, as your hand passes through their body as if it were a hollogram. Young Szenzau's are often seen attempting to balance on their tail, and scientists are yet to figure out why.

#creaturesuggestion
#Szenzau

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Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:33 PM

@dis0rientated

You know? It seems to be a magic-like creature *w*
Magic, fluffy creature! *wants to grab its tail and squish untile death*


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Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:34 PM

@dis0rientated @wererage I love it! XD

Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:35 PM

@wererage

Awe, thanks rage! 😸

@real

Thankyou! 😊

ems • 26 January 2013 at 4:36 PM

@dis0rientated

Three words.

I. FREAKING. LOVE. IT.

Oh wait. That was four. I don't really care though. 😋

I actually want one now. ><

Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:38 PM

@ems

Haha, thank you so much. 😃

ems • 26 January 2013 at 4:48 PM

@dis0rientated No problem. Check out my auction? 😸
How long did that take you to draw? o.o

Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:49 PM

@ems

Took me about 10 minutes to draw the outline and 10 mins to colour in. 😸

Sure, I'll check out the auction.

ems • 26 January 2013 at 4:50 PM

@dis0rientated *jaw drops* Woah. That's awesome.
Thank you. 😸

Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 4:51 PM

@ems

Hah, it's not that good. LOL.

Deleted • 26 January 2013 at 9:41 PM

@dis0rientated

😱 Wow!! Epic!!

*steals*

glados • 26 January 2013 at 10:12 PM

@dis0rientated
Ohh, this looks great! ;D

barbyka • 27 January 2013 at 3:29 AM

@dis0rientated

You get my vote towards making it a real creature! 😊

Deleted • 27 January 2013 at 7:18 AM

@rushingwater

Hehe 😉

@glados

Thankyou! 😃 It's now offically GLaDOS approved~

@barbyka

Thanks! 😸

Deleted • 27 January 2013 at 8:34 AM

More pings for you 😸

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extremeblueness • 27 January 2013 at 8:38 AM

@dis0rientated

I feel kinda bad giving you your first negative review, but its final stage looks a bit too much like the Blobbart for my liking.

And I wouldn't really want to have a creature that I can't get near.

Deleted • 27 January 2013 at 8:40 AM

@extremeblueness

How does it look like a Blobbart?

Thankyou for the opinion. 😊

extremeblueness • 27 January 2013 at 8:42 AM

@dis0rientated

The staff and bones on the face remind me of the Blobbart too much (final stages for both).

Deleted • 27 January 2013 at 8:45 AM

@extremeblueness

Ah, I see what you mean now.

Thank you, I'll keep that in mind!

lucky_cricket • 28 January 2013 at 8:49 AM

@dis0rientated Love it!!

sacredscars • 28 January 2013 at 9:04 AM

i like it! it's really cute

chapus • 28 January 2013 at 9:25 AM

@dis0rientated Nice! 😃
Critique:

Originality: 5/5

Very original, it's a unique creature, so far I haven't seen anything else like this. 😸 Although it does kind of remind me a bit of a Tokk. o3o Anyways, good job on the originality!

Visual: 4/5

The colours are well chosen and the drawing is clean and clear. 😸 Although the tail seems to be sticking out in a strange way on the first stage. 😋

Concept: 3/5

Nice idea you got there, but the description could use a bit more work, perhaps some more details.

Deleted • 28 January 2013 at 11:53 AM

@lucky_cricket

Thankyou! 😊

@sacredscars

Thanks!

@chapus2009

In the 1st stage it's supposed to be like, balancing on it's tail, I didn't really put that across too well, haha.

Thanks for the critique! I might change the description, I know it can be better.

Thank you very much! That was really useful. 😸

banana • 30 January 2013 at 3:04 PM

@dis0rientated awsome, love it!

Deleted • 30 January 2013 at 3:05 PM

@banana

Thanks! 😊