February/Valentine's Day Creature Suggestion- The Zuli

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circus • 1 January 2014 at 11:36 PM

Hi there!

Here is a small creature description:

Zuli's stripes grow from a light pink to a red, representing different moods such as friendship and love. The Zuli is born with a tulip bud in its mouth, which it carries around and nurtures as it grows. Zulis bring happiness wherever they go.

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140102C/ezimba11555734644500.jpg

I hope you like it! Please comment what you think.

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jazzyleia • 1 January 2014 at 11:42 PM

@circus

OMG A ZEBRA!!!! I love zebras *they are like my favorite non-domestic animal*

My comments:
~I love the Egg
~I love the last stage
~Love the description*
~I LOVE THE HEART ON THE TAIL

Suggestions to help:
~Maybe make a bigger or more noticable difference between 1st and 2nd stage. I mean, maybe a differnt light pink for 1st stage and a little darker pink for 2nd. I just feel like they are really close in color, but that could be me 😃

~Work on your description just a little more! I love what you have already and maybe add in the first line something like...

Zuli's stripes grow from a light pink to a dark red, simbolizing the changing moods in their relationship with their owner from friendship to love.

Anyway, hope my little stuff helps you! But I love it!

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cherryish • 1 January 2014 at 11:47 PM

@circus Very cute!! 😸 I also LOVE zebras. 😊 I love how you can see that the flower also blooms as the creature grows 😸 This is one of my favorites 😃

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cosmicbrambleclaw • 1 January 2014 at 11:49 PM

@circus lol yes

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emo_pattys • 1 January 2014 at 11:52 PM

@circus

Loved it! I ❤️ zebras hehe

I would love to have one of these 😃

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circus • 2 January 2014 at 1:31 AM

Thanks everybody! 😊

And Jazzyleia, I'm not very creative when it comes to writing xD So I'd let eggcave write the description.

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sony • 2 January 2014 at 1:39 AM

@circus
Awww, so cute! 😸
And that's exactly what this site's lacking, a zebra! 8D
I like the idea, and I think it's perfect for Valentine as well, so :>

Good luck~ ^^;;

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chapus • 2 January 2014 at 1:40 AM

Sorry, I can't copy/paste on this tablet without a mouse, whic I don't have with me at the moment. D: But good luck with your suggestion nonetheless! c:

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aedia • 2 January 2014 at 3:31 AM

@circus That's cute. 😊

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spirithawk • 2 January 2014 at 11:40 AM

@circus I love the idea of a zebra creature! I also made a zebra suggestion before but pretty much nobody saw it. xD

The only thing I don't like/understand is the flower in its mouth. So it's just born with a flower in it's mouth. Is it like, attached to the mouth and can never come out? xD (It would be very hard to eat anything lol). Or is it just a flower that they are born with and grows while they grow and they carry it around? d: Haha I guess it would make more sense to have the flower as a tail or have a lot of flowers as its mane, but this isn't my creature suggestion and this is just an opinion.

Besides that I really love it!

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circus • 2 January 2014 at 1:25 PM

Thanks for the input, spirithawk 😊 I changed the description so that it doesn't seem that the flower can't leave the Zuli, which just wouldn't make sense. xD

And I forgot to put the hashtag:

#creaturesuggestion

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meta_knight_lover • 2 January 2014 at 1:27 PM

@circus Not a bad idea, but I think it would look more unique if more was done with the flower. Like you could have the stripes on the Zuli be flowers or even have flowers naturally growing from its mane and tail. Just ways you spruce it up a little. X3

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circus • 2 January 2014 at 7:48 PM

Thanks 😊 If it gets chosen, maybe the drawer will add some details.

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@circus
... you know, that's genial? owo
Just noticed it but ... we have a giraffe creature and not a zebra? Impossible! So, you did really a great job ... plus I love the design, it's just amazing, and make me think about cherries and amarena ... yum! 😸

I totally support it! ❤️

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circus • 3 January 2014 at 3:37 PM

Thank you so much!

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jess11y • 3 January 2014 at 3:39 PM

@circus
I absolutely love it so much! Beautiful artwork, I would 100% buy this creature

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fizzlefruit • 3 January 2014 at 3:40 PM

@ everyone


What is everybody talking about?

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circus • 3 January 2014 at 3:42 PM

@jess11y thank you so much!

@fizzlefruit Welcome to eggcave! If you read the first post I made, you can see that I put a link to a creature suggestion I drew. I pinged you so that you could tell me if you liked my drawing or not.

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fizzlefruit • 3 January 2014 at 3:43 PM

@circus
oh thanks for telling me

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circus • 4 January 2014 at 12:49 AM

Sure 😊

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evolutary • 4 January 2014 at 1:00 AM

@Circus I like the egg stage the most as the tulip almost blends into the stripes on the egg. 😊 A pink zebra is very cute especially with the heart tail and the tulip in its mouth! A red tulip in the language of flowers means a declaration of love. ❤️ 😃

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circus • 4 January 2014 at 10:58 AM

Thank you!

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ilovedoctorwho • 7 January 2014 at 9:09 PM

@circus Zebras are the best! I'm so glad someone made a creature suggestion with a zebra! I love the colors too. All in all, it's great! 😸

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emilianagerson • 8 January 2014 at 2:59 PM

it looks awesome

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I like the idea, but the artwork itself is sort of crude, disjointed and disproportionate in my opinion.

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june • 9 January 2014 at 8:55 AM

@circus
Really cute, I love it!

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circus • 11 January 2014 at 5:27 PM

@choocalate That's not the actual artwork it will have...

Thanks, lemonade!

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egna889 • 11 January 2014 at 5:40 PM

@circus

I love it! I think we should make one. c:

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meleva • 12 January 2014 at 7:45 AM

@circus
Jawww! I like it!;😊 Some pings for ya:

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sony • 12 January 2014 at 11:29 AM

@meleva
Thanks for pinging.

@circus
Hello there, I posted on this topic but I'm gonna post it again lol~
YOUR CREATURE SUGGESTION IS AMAZING! 8D
We need a zebra indeed, or even better, a pink zebra o:
Haha, hope this gets made by Valentine! ^^

Good luck! ❤️

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