Creature Suggestion ~ Phoenich

ushafuse • 5 August 2014 at 7:28 AM

So I've thought of a creature suggestion I think is never going to work.
http://tinypic.com/r/344f609/8

Hope you like it! (Don't draw very well, please don't mind) Description:
Eggs - Sometimes the eggs feel warm, sometimes slimey and cold. They may smell of burnt wood or the everlasting smell of flowers. The SAR center discovered that the warm feeling makes you dizzy and the everlasting smell is toxic. But people still like to smell the eggs and touch the eggs when they are warm.

Phoenich - Phoenich fly whenever they are angry. When they are flying, everything goes wrong, if another Phoenich is with him. You can imagine what will happen. Their beaks will also go very orange and if they are very angry, they would breathe fire. When they are sad, their tails will drip little drips of water. The SAR center also found out that if the water from the tip of the Phoenich's touches any human, the human will die immediately.

So hope you like it! #creaturesuggestion
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sarahzafirah • 6 August 2014 at 5:48 AM

@ushafuse it looks pretty good! c: however, i recommend using markers and outlining the whole thing with a black pen before scanning, the image will look clearer and sharper.

ushafuse • 6 August 2014 at 6:01 AM

@sarahzafirah I think that would help a lot in my creature suggestions. Thanks!

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ashlinnhi • 6 August 2014 at 7:19 AM

@ushafuse Wow I love this suggestion! (A really got drawing too 😃)

ushafuse • 7 August 2014 at 4:55 AM

@ashlinnhi Thanks!!! Anything I need to improve on?
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ashlinnhi • 7 August 2014 at 5:20 AM

@ushafuse Hmm... no nothing much 😊 Should we ping some mods?

ushafuse • 7 August 2014 at 5:33 AM

@ashlinnhi I don't think so. The forum that Zac made said that it would not help.

ashlinnhi • 7 August 2014 at 7:11 AM

@ushafuse Oh ok then. Let's ping some other people then XD
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mastergemma • 7 August 2014 at 8:05 AM

@ushafuse
A fire/ice bird, not bad 😊 I like birdies. I like the description and the idea is definitely good. It just feels very basic for a suggestion. I'm not saying that basic is bad, for this suggestion, there just needs to be a little more with the colours.

Fire isn't just red, it's a mixture of yellow and orange, same with water. I think if you add a little difference in the colours it would look wonderful!

ushafuse • 8 August 2014 at 3:39 AM

@mastergemma I agree. I don't really focus on the colours. Thanks for the tip!
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