[Bird] Creature Suggestion: The Panbirdia

Deleted • 24 May 2017 at 9:01 PM

First of all, I can't do art, and I was asked by my friend @ellasparkle to write the creature description. So here it is! The Panbirdia. As stated, Ella did the art and I wrote the description. Hope you like it! I posted it 'cause Ella's not on.

Art:
https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-clPMxTbFOh8/WSYV0_ySiDI/AAAAAAAAA0I/KEE0tpT_84syFG6Z6CqRvS0WtBqY_sNrgCL0B/h2448/2017-05-24.jpg

Oh...just realized. She forgot to add evolution stats. 😋 I think these are it:
For 1st Stage: 100 Feeds and 3rd Stage: 300 feeds. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Description:
About Panbirdia Eggs:

The Panbirdia egg is widely known for the unusual object on its head. This object closely resembles what seems to be a fried egg and is the centre of many inquiries. Some claim that it is a hat, while others argue that it is a marking. Especially superstitious citizens believe that it is a form of alien communication, due to the strange things that happen when the egg is close to hatching. Panbirdia eggs are already warm to touch, but when close to hatching, the pan becomes unbearably hot. Witnesses also claim to see the tip of the egg glowing and hear a strange static noise. However, the actual sound is closer to that of crackling.

About the Panbirdia Creature:

When the Panbirdia first hatches, its body is very cold, and as a hatchling, must stay on its pan in order to stay warm because the pan serves as a source of heat. As the Panbirdia grows and is no longer constantly chilly, they also outgrow their pan. Panbirdias are also very protective of their eggs. When naughty children try to eat them, they will find themselves being chased away by overprotective Panbirdia parents. Alongside this, Panbirdias are travellers and often are seen all over Ark, with their trademark “frying-pan” hat on their heads. However, this is not for fashion purposes, but when the Panbirdia first leaves its pan behind to travel, they take part of their nest and shape it into a hat as a memory of when they were younger and a remembrance of home. Over time, this pan became the unique way to identify a Panbirdia and the SAR believes that the Panbirdia was the influence of the modern-day frying pan.

After days of talking after school...and maybe getting off topic, it's done! Please tell us if there are improvements to be made!

Who to ping...umm...unsure...
Pings (Forgive me):
@popcornflakes
@gellyjones
@fyrefox
@rosewolf09
@monsterprincess33

@ellasparkle Ping too! When you're on!

izz • 24 May 2017 at 9:29 PM

@nightassassin88
Cool! It looks so cute! When I saw the name I thought it would be a panda bird, but I like this much better.

Deleted • 24 May 2017 at 9:31 PM

@izz
Thanks! But you should give credit to @ellasparkle for the art!

izz • 24 May 2017 at 9:32 PM

Well then, awesome job @ellasparkle!

monsterprincess33 • 24 May 2017 at 9:49 PM

interesting concept... I think you should use the word mysterious and unbelievable in your description

=)

I personally cannot make out the drawing... it comes out very small. when I enlarge the image it becomes blurry .. but I get the drift... =)

@ellasparkle

thank you so much for sharing, keep me in the loop

ellasparkle • 24 May 2017 at 10:23 PM

@monsterprincess33 @izz

Thank you very much! The word unbelievable sound good to me ^^ And yeah ; - v -) My drawings usually come out really tiny, but I'm working on that! (also, yes, it is very "interesting" XD)

@nightassassin88

Thanks for posting it 😊 I just got back! THE DESCRIPTION IS AMAZING BOI. I certainly chose the right person 😉

Pings ❤️

@empresscleverbuddyaj
@rebel
@chicachicken
@doyoueverwonder
@poptarts

(sorry ;3;)

Deleted • 24 May 2017 at 10:26 PM

@monsterprincess33
Thanks for the feedback! I'll see if I can incorporate it...after I sleep and finish homework!

@ellasparkle
At least ping some other people...

ellasparkle • 24 May 2017 at 10:27 PM

@nightassassin88

Lol I edited the post XD (Like, 3 times)

Deleted • 24 May 2017 at 10:28 PM

@ellasparkle
You do realize those people won't get the pings...right?

monsterprincess33 • 24 May 2017 at 10:29 PM

thx, glad I could give some useful feedback...

nice work both of you... =)

ellasparkle • 24 May 2017 at 10:31 PM

@nightassassin88

(Did I ping people offline?!?!?!? It should be fine... probably XD)

@monsterrincess33

Thank YOU 😊 I'm always open to constructive criticism and I'm very happy when I receive it! And nightassassin88 did a very good job indeed ^^ I wonder if I should be paying her...

Deleted • 24 May 2017 at 10:32 PM

@ellasparkle
No...as in if you edit in the pings, they don't receive them. Bye...drama homework...

ellasparkle • 24 May 2017 at 10:34 PM

@nightassassin88

Thanks for letting me know that!

Pings (attempt no. 3, due to my many mistakes of not knowing how to ping people)

@empresscleverbuddyaj
@rebel
@chicachicken
@doyoueverwonder
@poptarts

(sorry ;3;)

Deleted • 24 May 2017 at 10:36 PM

@ellasparkle
Haha...also...please don't try and pay me...unless it's with food...finished drama!

rosewolf09 • 24 May 2017 at 10:40 PM

(has no clue as i was pinged) but this is amazing i tottally get 1
@nightassassin88

rebel • 24 May 2017 at 10:41 PM

@nightassassin88 It is very cute! Do you care to check out mine as well? 😊

ellasparkle • 25 May 2017 at 8:23 AM

@rebel @rosewolf09

Thanks for the feedback! We'll head on over to check out yours rebel 😉

petowner12309 • 25 May 2017 at 9:28 AM

This is adorbs!!! I love it!!

Deleted • 25 May 2017 at 10:39 AM

I like last stage the best
Critical comments:
The first one doesn't make much sense (Egg with fried egg on top)
Second one is cute, but the bird it levitating on top on the pan, doesn't make sense either

empresscleverbuddyaj • 25 May 2017 at 10:43 AM

@gellyjones
I don't like to criticize, but I must say I agree.

Deleted • 25 May 2017 at 2:57 PM

It's amazing!

Deleted • 25 May 2017 at 4:52 PM

@chicachicken @petowner12309 @rosewolf09
Thanks! We worked really hard on it!

@gellyjones
Ok! Thanks for the feedback!

@empresscleverbuddyaj
Anything you'd like to add, besides just agreeing with @gellyjones? 😋

@rebel
I would love to! I'll go check it out now!

Everyone! Please remember to ping @ellasparkle too! Ping us both please! 😊

ellasparkle • 25 May 2017 at 6:02 PM

@gellyjones

Drawing mistake by me ; - v -)/)) Thanks for the constructive criticism!

@pewtoner12309 @chicachicken

Thank you very much!!! We both really appreciate it!

@empresscleverbuddyaj

Remember to give constructive criticism, not just criticism ^^ Be sure to read the AJA post on that! I'll send you the link!

Deleted • 25 May 2017 at 6:05 PM

@nightassain88 your welcome 😊

fyrefox • 25 May 2017 at 9:13 PM

@nightassassin88
OMG SOOOO CUUUTEEEE!!!! XD
I think it looks great!

ellasparkle • 26 May 2017 at 10:50 PM

@fyrefox

Thank you sensei ;u;

Deleted • 30 December 2017 at 12:17 AM

LOOKS SPECTACULAR

gryffindor16 • 2 January 2018 at 3:11 AM

@ellasparkle
It's adorable! ❤️❤️😃 I hope it gets made!

littleblush • 2 January 2018 at 3:36 AM

@ellasparkle @nightassassin88
Ahhhh I love it it's so cute!!!! Description is great ❤️ Seriously hope this gets made 😊

redflipflap • 17 January 2018 at 1:41 PM

I love it!! ❤️