Poetry Contest

starpaw • 9 October 2011 at 6:32 PM

may i join? here. i dont care if i win but this was fun ^u^


Halloween a time for scare
All through the night
Little monsters stalk the night
Looking watching the little ones
Outside you go
Where to i dont know
Every where demons feast
Eyes and brains is what they eat
Nerds of suger they enjoy

glazzie • 9 October 2011 at 7:05 PM

Open your eyes as you're surrounded by darkness,
These terrifying monsters are completely heartless,
As for those little children,
Believing they're harmless.

The darkness closes in, yet there's noting to lose,
Picking up horrifying, halloween clues.
That there's something present,
At that point they knew by the moon,
That their fate was not at all pleasant.

Golden-wrapped candies flying from their grip,
The children hoping they would'nt slip.
Deadly souls, wisping after the group,
Surrounding them all, in a horrorful loop.
Cries and screams, let out.
The souls shuttered, "Don't pout."

Halloween night,
The scariest fright.
Shattered, the children left the door.
Running away, screaming "No more!"

nenielsen • 10 October 2011 at 5:23 PM

@novrain62 😊

Howling at the moon,
Albert, it's never too soon.
Let's go, come here,
Let's change, the time is near.
Oh, how fun it shall be.
We'll never let them see.
Everyone will be in disguise.
Everyone will only see our eyes.
No one will be living after tonight.

glazzie • 10 October 2011 at 11:45 PM

Aw, darnnnn it!
I didn't know it had to be acrostic!
>A< I worked forever on my poem!!!!

bribri1114845 • 11 October 2011 at 10:38 AM

@novrain62

Horrors and hobgoblins on All Hallow's Eve,
Abhorrent animals ambuscade in the trees,
Lurking and leering and grabbing your knees,
Leaving the light of the living lost and lonely.
Overwrought in the onslaught of howls off-key,
Werewolves and witches war in the alleys.
Effervescent luminescent creatures of the sea,
Every human turned monster to hoard candy,
Never knowing how many are monsters, truly.


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?bribri1114845
Oct. 11, 2011

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HAHA IT MAKES NO SENSE
definitely need time to fix this'n up

eternaleyes • 12 October 2011 at 4:10 PM

@novrain62

Halloween spooks

H headless men walking on their feet
A A Noisy man eats all of your treats
L Later then taking a seat
L Longer and Longer he will cheat
O Over the woods to take to sweet
W With his ghost buddies walking neat
E Endless the night and there was a fright
E Every single man died within sight
N Never go out in halloween because you know it aint right

novrain62 • 12 October 2011 at 10:34 PM

Just here to take a read 😊 Fun poems thus far & thank you for entering!! Wishing you good luck & reminding you that you have until the 29 to EDIT your poems.

Thank you most for following the posted RULES!!

@eternaleyes
@bribri1114845
@glazzie - you have time to create one 😊
@nenielsen
@starpaw - the field is open - never know who will win 😊

Prize Donations always accepted - GOOD LUCK!!

whispers • 12 October 2011 at 10:36 PM

@novrain62
can it be an eggcave holloween acrostic poem?

novrain62 • 12 October 2011 at 10:42 PM

CONTESTANTS

@cqpkytty
@bumblebee13_7
@qwaszx
@wolfmilk
@celeste
@pink_taro
@angel_star
@evolutary
@opal_dreams
@taffy789
@silverserpent
@rosey77
@xxcrayolademonxx
@spooky
@bloodshadows
@zellers5517
@eternaleyes
@bribri1114845
@glazzie
@nenielsen
@starpaw
@bluegirl80
@ninja aka @dream
@rukiaathen
@zellers5517
@2elle2
@lizardfeather
@pizza5pizza5
@mightyeglantine
@whispers
@phoenix
@truffles

Updated Contestant List -

If you'd like to join - please send me a PM -
ONLY POST POEMS HERE OR AN Occasional BUMP (IF it needs it) is okay .. Thank you!!

PS. BEWARE OF OVER LONG SENTENCES!!

whispers • 12 October 2011 at 10:51 PM

Hollowolves haunting the towns
Obarns going and screeching around
Little Goblars taking Candy Corns
Lots of Diment with their scary horns
Omnious winds with Spookcats in them
We see the Balrog scaring the men
Every little ghoul trying to be scary
Even though they know, Ghosty's are more scary
Not a single cove is merry, its all just scary

>😃
The eggcave holloween!
@novarain62
hope ya like it 😸

ice2505 • 14 October 2011 at 4:25 PM

WHOOPS!!! I accidently PM that poem with my entry!! Um...ok, here's mine..

Halldrags and Diments,
All going where they would like.
Luvleis and Tines hide in fright.
Loathsome Hallowolves howl with glee as
Obarns and Terrons swoop carefree
With all of these creatures,
Everywhere in sight,
Even the scary one, there's
Nothing to be afraid of this Halloween night!!!

@novarain62 😉 @whispers, no, i didn't take your idea. XD lol!! i thought i was the only one who was doing a eggcave theme!!

novrain62 • 17 October 2011 at 2:37 PM

@whispers @ice2505 - nice egg cave themed Acrostics ❤️

We are mid-way to Halloween.
Still time to get those poems edited
and entered - always accepting donations.

GOOD LUCK

ice2505 • 18 October 2011 at 4:21 PM

@novrain62 what kind of donations would you accept?? anything @ice6149??

novrain62 • 18 October 2011 at 6:46 PM

@ice2505 that is strictly up to you - just send me a PM

iulianna1 • 18 October 2011 at 8:33 PM

@novrain62
Okay, here's my poem! I'm sending it for zellers5517 (now cocoae) We might edit it before the contest ends...

-Hallows' Eve Night-

Hallows' Eve's in my crystal ball;
Atrocious beasts, come all;
Laughs and cackles, shadows and fear;
Lust, greed, and ghastly deeds, all you could want is here;
Ominous omens choke the air and eyes give you a stare;
Waning moon, the coming is close;
Every hair raised, all souls yearning this dose;
Eden of terror might the clock strike twelve;
Never still in killing; riot, rein, all you could want is here.

,___,
[0.0]
/)__) ~cocoae + iulianna1, October 18, 2011
-"--"
~Happy Halloween Egg Cave! Hope you all enjoyed our poem!~

novrain62 • 18 October 2011 at 8:42 PM

@julianna1 - good luck!

always accepting donations
Please post donation questions here:
http://www.eggcave.com/forums/topic/7830

UPDATED PRIZE LIST

FIRST PRIZE: Diment Egg (novrain62), Kinump (lwarlen)
SECOND PRIZE: Schnee Egg (Frozen) (novrain62), Kinump (qwaszx)
THIRD PRIZE: Ghostie (novrain62)
FOURTH PRIZE: Hatched Floicol w SOB travel (heartbreaker1198)
FIFTH PRIZE: Hatched Floicol w Firestorm Skies travel (heartbreaker1198)
SIXTH PRIZE: Twitch the OBarn
(Ice6149)

iulianna1


or PM me - This Forum thread if for POEMS only!

PM for everything else.

Thank you!!

HAVE FUN Writing your poems & GOOD LUCK!!

peppermintcowboy • 20 October 2011 at 8:31 PM

*bumpity bump bump*

😊

lizardfeather • 20 October 2011 at 8:35 PM

BUMP

I wonder why more people haven't joined? 0_0

whispers • 20 October 2011 at 8:37 PM

bump

tumblr • 22 October 2011 at 4:18 AM

instead of putting pink_taro, could you add @tumblr?

(read as on sentence) 😃

Haunted ghosts
Approaching
Lost souls
Loitering
On this
Wicked and
Evil and
Execrable
Night

novrain62 • 22 October 2011 at 4:46 AM

FIRST PRIZE: Diment Egg (novrain62), Kinump (lwarlen)
SECOND PRIZE: Schnee Egg (Frozen) (novrain62), Kinump (cqpkytty)
THIRD PRIZE: Ghostie (novrain62), Kinump (qwaszx), Adandoned Dark Castle Travel (iulianna1)
FOURTH PRIZE: Hatched Floicol w SOB travel (heartbreaker1198), Adandoned Dark Castle Travel (iulianna1)
FIFTH PRIZE: Hatched Floicol w Firestorm Skies travel (heartbreaker1198), Adandoned Dark Castle Travel (iulianna1)
SIXTH PRIZE: Twitch the OBarn
(Ice6149)

@iulianna1 - thank you for the travel donations!! 😊

PRIZE LIST UPDATED

@tumblr - thank you for your entry!!


JUDGES PANEL has been completed:

@novrain62
@redfire77
@lwarlen
@candy_girl_1298

Prize DONORS

@heartbreaker1198 - (2) hummingbirds (1-SOB travel, (1) Firesky Storm w/ hummingbirds)
@lwarlen - First Place Pumpkin (Kinump)
@cqpkytty - Second Place Pumpkin (Kinump)
@qwaszx - Third Place Pumpkin (Kinump)
@iulianna1 - Third, Fourth, Fifth place (3 Dark Abandoned Castel travels)
@novrain62 - Diment egg (First Place), Frozen Schnee Egg (Second Place)
@Ice6149 - Twitch the Obarn (Sixth Place)
@aliced1221 - a terron, chocob, and flunny
@bit_o_sweet - 1 abandoned dark castle travel

Thank you so much - Donations accepted until October 29

phoenix • 23 October 2011 at 6:27 PM

@novrain62 Here is my halloween poem 😸

Happy children trick or treating,
Asking everyone they are meeting.
Looking for someone they can ask,
Loving the candy they get after a task.
Often knocking on new doors,
Will always be one of their chores.
Every time they go on a stroll,
Ending it they do, by finishing their goal!
No one will stop them from eating the candy whole!

Have a spooky halloween eggcave ^^

novrain62 • 23 October 2011 at 6:55 PM

@aliced1221 - 3 creature donations coming 😊 YAH!!

@phoenix - thank you for your entry & good Luck!! 😊

Remember, every one, you have until October 29 to Edit and make sure everything is perfect 😊

Open for entries still - open for Donations


Thank you for your support & Good Luck!

flakes • 24 October 2011 at 4:56 AM

umm i dont think i like to join. i am not a poetry type person, i cant stand the peacefulness of poetry. @novrain62 i will decide later but first dont add me

novrain62 • 24 October 2011 at 6:20 AM

@kdxu - i don't think you are added to the list - please send me a PM or comment on my wall with any additional comments - poems ONLY go here - thank you!

@truffles @phoenix - new entries; good luck!!



WILL NOT BE EXCEPTING ANY NEW ENTRANTS AFTER WEDNESDAY - SO IF YOUR JOINING - YOU MUST SIGN UP BEFORE THEN!!

GOOD LUCK!!


IF ANYONE WOULD LIKE TO DONATE ANY OF THE NEW HALLOWEEN CAVE CREATURES - PM ME! Wednesday is the deadline for donations, too.

Thank you!!

@bit_o_sweet - (1) abandoned dark castle travel - thank you so much!!

yogurt • 24 October 2011 at 7:21 PM

bump. 😋

bit_o_sweet • 24 October 2011 at 7:27 PM

bump 😊

novrain62 • 24 October 2011 at 8:04 PM

FIRST PRIZE: Diment Egg (novrain62), Kinump (lwarlen), Abandoned Dark Castle (novrain62)

SECOND PRIZE: Schnee Egg (Frozen) (novrain62), Abandoned Dark Castle (bit_o_sweet)Kinump (qwaszx),

THIRD PRIZE: Ghostie (novrain62), Adandoned Dark Castle Travel (iulianna1)

FOURTH PRIZE: Chocob (aliced1221), Adandoned Dark Castle Travel (iulianna1)

FIFTH PRIZE: Flunny, Adandoned Dark Castle Travel (iulianna1)

SIXTH PRIZE: Hatched Floicol w SOB travel (heartbreaker1198)

SEVENTH PRIZE: Hatched Floicol w Firestorm Skies travel (heartbreaker1198)

EIGHTH PRIZE: Terron (aliced1221)

NINTH PRIZE Twitch the OBarn (Ice6149)

Prize DONORS

@heartbreaker1198 - (2) hummingbirds (1-SOB travel, (1) Firesky Storm w/ hummingbirds)
@lwarlen - First Place Pumpkin (Kinump)
** Second Place Pumpkin (Kinump)
@qwaszx - Third Place Pumpkin (Kinump)
@iulianna1 - Third, Fourth, Fifth place (3 Dark Abandoned Castel travels)
@novrain62 - Diment egg (First Place), Frozen Schnee Egg (Second Place)
@Ice6149 - Twitch the Obarn (Sixth Place)
@aliced1221 - a terron, chocob, and flunny
@bit_o_sweet - 1 abandoned dark castle travel

Deleted • 25 October 2011 at 5:30 PM

@novrain62 can i change the one floicol to a kinump? I forgot about the firestorm sky and used it o a friend DX If I find another I will put that in along with the kinump, sorry about this T.T☹️

Deleted • 26 October 2011 at 4:33 AM

I'm feeling hurt...

Hatred swells in the icy Hell,
A terrosome trove waiting afar the depths ,
Lumanious rays, the sinewous sways swords they break bringing sty of the day,
Longing the time seeking to dine the ebony whip it crashes bringforth,
Odious melodies carrying death steads,
Waning moon the blanket of Shadows coming to tune,
eerie time the showering slime,
Ecentric beast come yee of all bearing tooth or claw,
Nyt for-shadows sweeping the Time of the Eve has brought the eyes of malicious greed

Top of my head. :/ Good luck to everybody