[Bird] Suggestion of the ~Phoi~

Deleted • 21 May 2017 at 10:28 PM

Colored Version
http://cakecutie.deviantart.com/art/Updated-colored-682287339

Not Colored Version
http://cakecutie.deviantart.com/art/Bird-Suggestion-681954009

Meet the Phoi!

Small Rough Draft of the Phoi
The Phoi is an ancient bird that is told to come every few years to the land of Ark. This unique bird is rare and is only seen in the mountains and nearby rivers of Ark where they hide and feast. These Phoi often feed on Borro's and also creatures like the Kesko. Once the ancient bird has settled a single feather falls. Once the feather hits the land of Ark a wave of guilt lands on the citizens. This is why the Arkian's remember this day as the 'Guilt of All'. Many hunt for the majestic birds feathers for they are told to be worth much fortune. However, a feather from the Phoi lands every 10 years which is one of the many reasons they are hunted.

Hope that was OK so far. Please give me tips or leave comments below 😊

No description atm since I am terrible at writing. However, will be working on one if I can not find someone to help me XD


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rebel • 21 May 2017 at 10:34 PM

@lightningpaws Nice, I like it! What kind of color scheme are you thinking? It kind of reminds me of a phoenix!

skyfall4 • 21 May 2017 at 10:35 PM

@lightningpaws
THAT IS SO HECHING BEAUTIFUL @IAN THIS NEEDS TO BE A CREATURE ❤️

Deleted • 21 May 2017 at 10:40 PM

@rebel
I was thinking of a light bluish look with a faded red kind of look in it XD

@skyfall
Haha thanks so much ❤️ You're the best!!! Love ya ❤️

kudo • 22 May 2017 at 4:19 AM

@lightningpaws I really want to help with the description! 😃 as for the egg, maybe redo it into something a little more elaborate? i really like the last stage since it reminds me of a pheonix XD the second stage looks rather like a mo i suppose, but it's still better than anything i could possibly hope to do! 😊

Deleted • 22 May 2017 at 4:59 PM

@silvershadow

Of course! And yes defiantly will. Hopefully everything will look better with the egg fixed and the colors on ^^



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prairie • 22 May 2017 at 5:18 PM

@lightningpaws

Pretty! 😃
Makes me think of a cockatoo mixed with phoenix! 😃

Deleted • 22 May 2017 at 6:52 PM

@lightningpaws that's impressive 😊

Deleted • 22 May 2017 at 9:25 PM

@prairie
Thanks! And haha yeah it does now that I get a good look lol XD

@chickachicken
Thank you so much! Hopefully I can get it colored by tomorrow afternoon (However I have Volleyball practice X-X lol)

poe • 23 May 2017 at 1:04 AM

@lightningpaws
Hey that looks pretty nice! It looks very graceful. Kind of a personal opinion, but I find it a little generic. Perhaps with colours it will look more interesting. I look forward to seeing it coloured. ^^

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@poe

Of course! I'll defiantly try to color it today after my finals and volleyball ^^

cokealoka • 23 May 2017 at 5:18 PM

What a pretty bird, I can't wait to see what else you can come up with!

Deleted • 23 May 2017 at 7:15 PM

UPDATED! COLORED AND FIXED EGG 😃

Hopefully this improvement is better!


http://cakecutie.deviantart.com/art/Updated-colored-682287339

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@chickachicken
Updated!

Pings sorry:
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immortalraven • 23 May 2017 at 7:22 PM

@lightningpaws
I like it ❤️

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@immortalraven

Thank you ❤️ also added a small description that I'm trying to work on.

Pings sorry:

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spiritkoi • 23 May 2017 at 9:23 PM

@lightningpaws Oo, I really like those colors together! I'm always fond of phoenix like birds too. ^^

Deleted • 23 May 2017 at 10:59 PM

Thanks so much @spiritkoi !!! Means so much ❤️

lendulka • 24 May 2017 at 4:42 AM

@lightningpaws

Very pretty, one of the best I have seen so far.

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@lendulka

Omg thank you ❤️❤️ I'm glad you think so ^^


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