Discord Returns

whitefire • 13 March 2013 at 11:26 PM

Umberisk shifted into a cat, hoping to be less noticeable in that form, and took off down the slippery soap road. Though she fell on her face several times, she managed to escape Ponyville. She'd been meaning to leave for a while; now seemed like the perfect time due to its chaos.
She hated socializing, but she had still set her sights on Canterlot.
'I can be a bird until I get there,' she thought as she shifted.
... Or not, seeing as she somehow managed to get herself stuck in cat form.
'Oh well, I'll make due.'
... And then she was in Canterlot. Too much chaos! First unhelpful, helpful, ...
Ugh! Just make up your mind, discorded world!
... And then she was in the castle. This just didn't make any sense!
Umberisk attempted to cower in the corner, which is easy, when you're a cat... At least, it should have been, had the room not been in anti-gravity mode.

@SSTwins
... Sorry for the writer's block, I just received some really sad news...

ems • 18 March 2013 at 7:21 PM

@sstwins *poke* Am I accepted? 😋

sandstorm99 • 18 March 2013 at 9:25 PM

@sstwins

Wait.. before I make a form.. are the spots still avalible? Honesty, Generosity and magic?

EDIT!: Mwahaha! I claim Honesty!!

Name: Midnightsplash
Gender: Female
Cutie Mark: a white shell that stands for the ocean
Strengths (soon to be flaws!): Anything with the ocean, talking with underwater creatures
Age (Filly,Mare, Colt, Stallion): Young mare
Pony type (earth pony, unicorn, pegasus): Unicorn
Personality: MS is always lying and looking uncomfortable, and she always tries to hide things... in addition to that, that she's stubborn and wants her way
Appearance (color scheme, picture optional!): Erm.. she has a black coat, and a dark purple horn that turns lighter at the top. Dark purple and navy blue man and tail.. and a random purple splash on her hind right plank
Background (if you have one ): ? History? Nothing really.. she was born in Ponyville and lived there her whole life
Other: Currently lives with her family in a floral shop

sstwins • 18 March 2013 at 11:48 PM

@whitefire Aww sorry to hear that you got bad news!! I was going to critique your post, just with some comments. Sorry if I seem rude. ☹️
Hmm, I wasn't aware that Umberisk could shape shift! Is that the changeling in her?
It seems like things happened very fast, and I didn't really understand a few parts. Such as this, "... And then she was in Canterlot. Too much chaos! First unhelpful, helpful, ...
Ugh! Just make up your mind, discorded world!" Do you realize that Canterlot is empty? And the unhelpful, helpful part was also very confusing.
Again, I'm so sorry for the harsh critique!
@ems Yup, accepted!
@sandstorm99 Honesty and Generosity are still available!
@sstwinz Here I go!
Discord let go of Lightning and flipped her upside down in the air.
"Who are you holding it onto for? Another pony? Are you going to form," Discord stopped to chuckle. "form the Elements of Harmony? With yourself, a pony who abandons everyone she meets and possibly Pepper, a pony obsessed with hatred? You'd do better forming the Anti-Elements of Harmony!" Discord gave into his laughter and collapsed into giggles.
Pepper had somehow managed to recover from his encounter with the ceiling and was back hovering in the air. He flipped upside down to match Lightning. "Upside down buddies!!!!!!!!" He shrieked like a foal.

magenta • 19 March 2013 at 12:02 AM

@sstwins

Name: Lunar Storm
Gender: Female
Cutie Mark: A Mist of Purple smog with a Bolt of lightning
Strengths (soon to be flaws!): She could care less about what others think about her , Very selfish , seldom cares about others
Age (Filly,Mare, Colt, Stallion): Mare
Pony type (earth pony, unicorn, pegasus): Pegasus
Personality: Rough , Serious (at times) , Pretty Cold
Appearance (color scheme, picture optional!): A Dark purple pony with a messy Dark blue mane and tail and Icy Blue Eyes
Background (if you have one ): She comes from a poor family and her entire family is dead from a disease , she also caught the disease but was somehow cured
Other: She has a scar below her right eye

EDITED

ems • 19 March 2013 at 12:04 AM

@sandstorm99 😋 If you have honesty, then she should lie, because these are the ANTI-elements. 83
@sstwins Oh dear, Pepper seems very un-Pepper-like. 😋
@whitefire
@sstwinz
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Shadow found the courage to leave her floating-spinning house, leaping into the air and taking flight. Sadly, when she looked to Canterlot, it seemed just as discorded. "Oh no." She muttered. "I'd heard of this happening but... Isn't Celestia gone this time?" Her eyes widened in fear. "I.... Should at least check it out." She told herself, and before she could lose her nerve, Shadow began to fly to Canterlot.

Shadow sighed, finally making it to the empty streets of Equestria's capital, which was just as bad as Ponyville, if not worse. "Oh Celestia, where are you?" She asked, knowing the princess wouldn't hear her. She tried to step forward, but found she could barely move. "Really?" She said dryly, and began to struggle her way to the castle.

sstwins • 19 March 2013 at 12:05 AM

@sandstorm99 Whoop! Are you planning to be Discorded? Otherwise, we need you to have the opposite personality!
@magenta Hmmm, we really need an anti-generosity. Would you be willing to switch up Lunar's personality a little? 😃 Then we'll have all the anti-elements!!

magenta • 19 March 2013 at 12:12 AM

@Sstwins Sure 😃

Edited : Done

sstwinz • 19 March 2013 at 12:14 AM

@sstwins Oh, oh, I need to catch my breath. That's the funniest thing I ever read. Oh. Help! I can't breathe! Ahhhhhaahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

@sandstorm99 You know that we're the Anti-Elements, right? Not just the Elements? If you want to be really honest, we're gonna have to Discord you!!! 😊
Edit: Looks like I got beat to saying this! Sorry to hear it repeated three times!!!

Lightning glared at Discord as he flipped her upside down. The worst part was, she had no idea how to get herself back up. She really had no control over her flight without her wings. Discord began to talk again. "Who are you holding it onto for? Another pony? Are you going to form," At this point, he stopped and began laughing. Lightning didn't see what was so funny. She glowered at Discord and her mane fell upside down, covering her eyes. Great, now she couldn't see. Discord was still talking, having recovered from his chuckling fit. "form the Elements of Harmony? With yourself, a pony who abandons everyone she meets and possibly Pepper, a pony obsessed with hatred? You'd do better forming the Anti-Elements of Harmony!" He burst into giggles. Wait, did he really not guess what they were doing? That could be really good for her. She heard Pepper's voice from somewhere near her, laughing about how they could be upside down buddies. Lightning swiped her hooves randomly in front of her, trying to find her mane to get it out of her eyes. She didn't meet with much luck, instead just hitting air. She also zipped to the side, hitting something soft and furry. It must have been Pepper. Lightning scowled under her puffy blue cover. This day kept getting worse and worse.

ems • 19 March 2013 at 12:19 AM

@whitefire
@sstwinz
@sstwins EDIT OMG... I totally got this anti-element mixed with another! D: Editing my other post now! So sorry! ><
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Shadow looked up at the castle. /Hmm./ She heard loud, ringing laughter coming from it, along with shrieks of joy. "Has Celestia gone insane? Or has she left... Just like they're all saying she did...?" Shadow wondered aloud, dragging herself towards the large double doors. The gravityy problem began to get worse and worse as she neared the castle, and Shadow grunted with exertion. "Oh come on!" She shouted, angry, then stared at the doors that seemed many miles high. She frowned, knowing she could do nothing to stop Discord, and probably wouldn't be able to even open the doors! But she had to try. Whoever was inside may be able to help... /Here goes nothing.../ Shadow thought.

sstwinz • 19 March 2013 at 12:23 AM

@ems Wait!!!!!! @sstwins didn't say it, but the gravity is messed up. There's a gravity bubble around the Mane 6, which is sucking the gravity in. So the ground feels like it's sucking at your hooves, and it gets stronger as you get nearer to the source, which is in the castle. You could barely be able to walk, let alone fly!
So sorry, but I just realized that!!! Ahhhhh!!!

ems • 19 March 2013 at 12:26 AM

@sstwinz I have to edit anyways. XD ALl my posts imply that Shadow lies, but that's in another RP! 8D LOL. Now I must double-edit my second post. v.v

@sstwins ^

EDIT: Done! All my posts are ok now. XD

whitefire • 19 March 2013 at 9:43 PM

@SSTwins By unhelpful, helpful I mean that the chaos is first helpful, like getting her to Canterlot, then not, like taking for the moment her shapeshifting abilities. And I said in her form that she's a shapeshifter.
By the way, she was chaosed into the room with Lightning, Pepper, and Discord. From now on I'll be a while in responding, because I've been forced to use my 3DS.

sstwins • 19 March 2013 at 11:58 PM

@ems Awesome! We're in the ballroom, so you can meet us soon there. 😉
@whitefire Ok, thanks for clearing those things up a little! Sorry if I was confused. 😱
@sstwinz Here I gooo!
Pepper yelped as Lightning wacked into him. He flew slowly to the opposite wall.
Discord groaned and flipped Lightning back up. He left her hair in front of her face though, creating a just got out of bed look. Pepper evidently liked it, he was trotting around in the air yelling, "Lightning, your hair is cute!!!!!", at the top of his lungs.
Discord made a more serious mental note to take down the gas with Pepper. He was seriously starting to get annoying.

ems • 20 March 2013 at 12:07 AM

@sstwinz
@sstwins Okey dokey! ;3 ...Lokey. 😋
@whitefire
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Shadow's irritation helped her a bit, but not enough. She threw herself at the doors in an attempt to bash them open, but with the gravity problem, the doors were much heavier, and Shadow could barely move. So basically what happened was Shadow's face got smashed into the doors. "Wonderful." She moaned, but the doors gave way and opened. Sadly, Shadow face-planted into the tile floors. "At least I'm in." She mumbled, struggling to her feet.

Shadow continued dragging her hooves, wishing she could fly, though she knew it wouldn't work, even if she could open her wings--she'd tried, and failed. Huffing, Shadow rested outside a ballroom of sorts it seemed, and the laughter was louder in there. /Hm.../ Shadow thought, and pulled herself inside, where she instantly floated upwards. Gulping, she saw a cat, two ponies--a pegasus and earth pony--and Discord, all floating around. The red earth pony was screaming something about hair, and the pegasus looked irritated, with a crown and five necklaces on.

sstwinz • 20 March 2013 at 12:15 AM

@sstwins @ems @whitefire

Lightning's stomach turned as she was suddenly flipped right-side up again. Even worse, her mane was still in front of her face, so she couldn't see. Pepper's voice passed by her, screaming about how cute her hair was. Lightning was going to kill him once she had control of her flight again. She heard some noises coming from where she assumed the door was, but passed them off as nothing. She swiped her hooves in front of her again, trying to locate Discord. If she found him, she was going to hit him in the face. Pepper would work too. She located something fuzzy and grabbed it, swinging her hoof until it hit the jaw of a pony. All of a sudden, she realized that what she had been holding wasn't fur, but feathers. She had just hit a pegasus, who was presumably the source of the noises at the door. Whoops.

ems • 20 March 2013 at 12:20 AM

@sstwins
@sstwinz
@whitefire
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Shadow yelped as the pegasus with the hair in her eyes took a swing at her jaw. "Here... Um, lemme help you with that." SHe said a bit awkwardly, pushing the mare's mane out of her face. "Uh... You alright? And why are you carrying all those necklaces?" She asked curiously. She covered her mouth with her hoof, stealing a nervous glance at Discord. She most certainly did NOT want to be his new pony pet!

sstwinz • 20 March 2013 at 12:25 AM

@sstwins
@ems Wait, is Shadow around the Mane 6's age, or younger? Sorry to ask!
@whitefire

"Oh, umm, thanks." Lightning said, looking at the black filly who had just come into the room. "I'm fine. I'm just holding onto these necklaces for... someone." Would the new filly make a good Anti-Element? Lightning couldn't tell, as they had just met. "So, who are you? How did you get here?" She asked the filly.

ems • 20 March 2013 at 12:30 AM

@sstwins
@whitefire
@sstwinz It's okay, She's still a filly. ^^
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"I'm Shadow.... I saw what Canterlot looked like... And... Well, even though it was as bad as Ponyville, I thought that some sort of help might be here..." Shadow said quietly, avoiding the mare's eyes. She shifted her hooves nervously, and tried not to send herelf twirling through the anti-gravity room.

sstwins • 20 March 2013 at 12:33 AM

@whitefire
@magenta You're accepted! 😉
@sstwinz @ems I'm going to bed, don't do a ton without me!

Pepper pointed at the two pegasi conversing in the corner and yelled with blatant odviousness "Loook, Lightning has a friend!!!" Discord rolled his eyes.
"I can see that, you foal." He summoned a microphone from midair and directed it at the new filly. "Come on up, don't be shy!" He then teleported the mares in front of him on a mini stage in the air. "I'm your host Discord-"
"I'm PEPPER!!!"
Discord coughed and glared at Pepper. "As I was saying, I'm your host Discord. And who are you?"

ems • 20 March 2013 at 12:36 AM

@sstwins Okies!
@sstwinz
@whitefire
@magenta
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Shadow's pupils shrank down to little pinpoints, and she crouched in a futile attempt to disappear. "Um... I'm... Shadow." She squeaked, quaking. /Oh no... Oh no no no no no.../ She thought. /This was an awful idea./

magenta • 20 March 2013 at 1:09 AM

@Ems @Sstwins

Can you explain the Summary ? Sorry .. Im just too lazy to read all 6 pages ^^

ems • 20 March 2013 at 1:15 AM

@magenta Yeah, I have no idea. O-o I just jumped in. xD Right now they're in the ballroom of Celestia's castle in Canterlot (which is empty) and Discord introduced himself to Shadow and Lightning. Gravity is messed up around and inside the castle, so it's almost impossible to move. In the ballroom through, it's anti-gravity, so once you're in, you float. 😋

The mane 6 are trapped, Lightning found them a few posts ago. The elements are corrupted, hence the need for ponies who represent the anti-elements. Lightning has all the elements. Pepper (who it seems is high on laughing gas) is floating around the room--shouting the obvious--and screaming other random things completely unrealted to the banishing of Discord. Discord is a bit irritated by this, and so is Lightning. Shadow is sort of indifferent becaus she just got there. dx

magenta • 20 March 2013 at 1:32 AM

@Ems Thhxxx 😃DDD Well I'll TRY to fit in X3
XDDD Laughing gas ;D
@Sstwins
@Sstwinz
@Whitefire
I suck at Role Playing so forgive me if I do something wrong 😋
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Lunar Storm was finally in Canterlot , she was looking all over for the one who had done the chocolate rain and dirtied her one and only outfit . "Pff,Discord ?More like Dumb Lord ." She muttered as she landed on the floor but instead of being able to trot towards the castle all she could do was slow buly movements. " All Dumblord's fault for sure."She grumbled as she slowly made her way towards Celestia's castle . "The party is over , Dumblord."She said to Discord as she stamped her hoove slowly on the marble floor , or what she thought was the marble floor . Instead of the situation just now , she was floating ?

ems • 20 March 2013 at 1:35 AM

@magenta lol. 😋 But remember, gravity's screwed up in Canterlot, so you can't even really even walk well, let alone fly. ^^

chrismas123_inc • 20 March 2013 at 1:46 AM

@Ems OH I THOUGHT ONLY IN CELESTIA'S CASTLE OHHHH I'LL EDIT IT STRAIGHT AWAY 😱OOOOO

ems • 20 March 2013 at 1:55 AM

@chrismas123_inc Okies. ;3 LOL.

raindrop • 20 March 2013 at 2:12 AM

@magenta You aren't floating everywhere. *facedesk* Did you skim my summary, silly? 😋 *pokes summary* Gravity is STRONGER in Canterlot, so you aren't floating, in fact, you're barely able to move. This gets worse as you near the castle, but once inside the ballroom of the castle, it's zero-gravity, so you can float there. Also, FYI, you can't use your wings in Canterlot, so you can land once you're there, but you won't be able to even open your wings.

magenta • 20 March 2013 at 2:13 AM

@Raindrop Oh '-' Im sorry 😋 I'll retry again '-'

ems • 20 March 2013 at 2:35 AM

@magenta LOL, better. ;3 I gotta go. See ya tomorrow!