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sstwinz • 20 March 2013 at 8:43 AM
@magenta Maybe you can give a quick description about why you came to Canterlot. Because it's totally deserted, other than the ponies in the ballroom. If you want, you could even stay in Ponyville and meet some of the other Anti-Elements, and we can find you! 😊 But if you want to come and join us in Canterlot, that's good too.@ems Thanks for giving @magenta the description!
sstwins • 20 March 2013 at 10:57 AM
@magenta Do you mind if I gently ignore you for now? Maybe you could edit your post to a little more of what @sstwinz said, like why you happen to be in Canterlot! 😉@ems @sstwinz @whitefireDiscord rolled his eyes at the tiny pony's pathetic squeaking. "Like I said before, Shadow, don't be shy. I don't want to hurt any of you. Right Pepper?""Righty-o!!!" Pepper scooted up to Discord's shoulder."See. We just want to have some fun. Now, for our second contestant." Discord moved the microphone over to the white mares mouth. Before she could speak, Pepper answered the question, yelling at the top of his lungs, "THAT'S LIGHTNING BOLT!!!!!!!!!! SHE'S MY BEST FRIEND!!!!!!!!"
sstwinz • 20 March 2013 at 12:35 PM
@ems @sstwins This might be my shortest post ever! Sorry!!@whitefire @magentaLightning glowered at the boys. Her mane had puffed up so that it formed a fuzzy cloud above her head, completely covering the Anti-Element of Magic. She ignored the microphone, Pepper had already introduced her. She waited to see what was going to happen next. It had better be good.
ems • 20 March 2013 at 7:37 PM
@sstwins@sstwinz@magenta@whitefire--Shadow didn't appear very reassured, but who knows? Maybe a bit of discord would be fun! So she smiled, only to have that smile disappear as the red earth pony screamed about Lightning Bolt. "Would you pipe down?!" She yelled, irritated.
sandstorm99 • 20 March 2013 at 8:21 PM
@ems @raindrop @magenta @sstwins @sstwinz Plus a buncha other people I missed! xDxD Is Midnight Splash accepted? 😊 I edited it.. and what happened so far?
ems • 20 March 2013 at 8:24 PM
@sandstorm99 *slap* Raindrop is my SIDE for the millionth time. XD Also, I have a kinda-summary on page 6.
sandstorm99 • 20 March 2013 at 8:27 PM
@ems xD Whoops!Midnight Splash woke up grouchily in Ponyville, the sun seemed to cast a glow on her. As she tromped through the town, other ponies looked at her with annoyed looks. Awkwardly, she trotted back off to the train station. Accidently, she knocked over a little foal and his apple pie. He started wailing loudly, and his mother picked him up and looked expectantly at Midnight Splash. "Hey, don't look at me! I didn't knock him over! He did it on his own, he's lopsided!" the mother angrily walked away. Midnight Splash hurried on the train, heading toward Canterlot. She was going there because of a letter from Princess Luna calling her to the Canterlot lands.
sstwins • 20 March 2013 at 9:10 PM
@sandstorm99 ...umm... Mind editing that a little bit? I'll put up some critique, if you don't mind. 😊I know she's probably being random because of Discord, but whats her reason for being there? When did Midnight get to Canterlot, seeing as its empty? You should probably start out in Ponyville, if you live there.How can she waltz in? There's an antigravity spell over the majority of Canterlot, originating in the basement of the castle. Odds are, she'd crawl in, not waltz.I know she called Discord her, "Best friend" just because of the element of lies, but that doesn't quite make sense here. Plus, shes not exactly a crazy pony. You described her as stubborn, awkward, and uncomfortable. I know that Pepper is crazy now, but he got sprayed with laughing gas by Discord.Ouch. Sorry if that was a little harsh. Your writing style is very good, if you could just edit a few thing we'd be good to go!I'll do a post from my side @roseshy in a min, don't be offended if I ignore you until your edits are up. 😊
sandstorm99 • 20 March 2013 at 9:22 PM
@sstwins WHew! Just edited.. is it okay? xD
roseshy • 20 March 2013 at 9:25 PM
@sandstorm99 SStwins here! That was much, much better. The only problem is the, "mysterious pony calling her there". Who is that? Maybe you could also break up your post to Ponyville, and then after I post, the Canterlot part. That way your long train ride won't seem as awkward when we're on the same time as before. 😊 I'll be back to posting on @sstwins now!
sandstorm99 • 20 March 2013 at 9:28 PM
@sstwins This is confusing! xD I'm not sure the letter from Princess Luna makes total sense.. but..><
sstwins • 20 March 2013 at 9:32 PM
@ems @sstwinz @magenta @whitefire @sandstorm99"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" Pepper yelled back at the funny black filly. Discord facepalmed. "Anyway, welcome Lightning and Shadow. Today we'll be playing Tickles and Troubles on the subject of Equestrian History. Tickles and Troubles, as you all should know, is the new hot game show on EQTV. You play by answering a question I give you. If you get the question right, you get tickled. If you get it wrong, you get trouble. Of course, the trouble is a surprise! As an added benefit to this game, the pony who answers the most questions right has the opportunity to walk out of here. The loser does not. Are you ready to play?"
sandstorm99 • 20 March 2013 at 9:34 PM
@sstwins When she finally arrived after a long nap, she hurried out to the streets. No one. Hm.. she decided to check the castle. "I hate that color." SHe muttered as she ran by an aquaish color that she liked. Finally, she crawled in through the doors of the Castle ballroom, then yelped as she was lifted in to the air with the gravity mix up.. then she looked at Discord and the other ponies. "I didn't appear right now." SHe said, her eyes darting and shifting awkwardly
sstwins • 20 March 2013 at 9:39 PM
@sandstorm99 @ems @sstwinz @magenta @whitefire Sorry its a little short!Discord teleported the awkward mare to the stage with the others. "A late comer. Really. I had a start time for the show, you know!""Yeah, booooo!""Quiet Pepper. Now that you're here, I suppose you can play. What is your name?" Discord extended the microphone yet again.
sandstorm99 • 20 March 2013 at 9:43 PM
@sstwins @ems @sstwinz @magenta @whitefireMidnight Splash looked around, Discord apparently was talking to.. her? "Midnight Splash.. I think." She replied, shuffling her hooves around. SHe wondered what the heck these ponies were even doing here, and what that thing was anyways! Besides, she despises being tickled anyways, so what's with the game? Her eyes skimmed over the other ponies standing next to her..
sstwinz • 20 March 2013 at 10:32 PM
@sandstorm99 Am I allowed to critique your post really quick?
ems • 21 March 2013 at 12:19 AM
@sstwins@sstwinz@sandstorm99@whitefire--Shadow glared fiercly at Pepper, angered by his annoying behavior. "--Today we'll be playing Tickles and Troubles on the subject of Equestrian History. Tickles and Troubles, as you all should know, is the new hot game show on EQTV. You play by answering a question I give you. If you get the question right, you get tickled. If you get it wrong, you get trouble. Of course, the trouble is a surprise! As an added benefit to this game, the pony who answers the most questions right has the opportunity to walk out of here. The loser does not. Are you ready to play?" She heard Discord say.Looking up at the very, very odd... whatever Discord was, Shadow said, "Sounds... Fun." She said, mulling the game over. She'd never been tickled before, but this game was actually more innocent than Shadow had expected. She smiled a bit. "OK!"
magenta • 21 March 2013 at 2:24 AM
@Sstwins Sure ^^ i edited it 😋 But as I said , im not that good in rping ^^
sstwinz • 21 March 2013 at 8:59 AM
@sandstorm99 @ems @sstwins @magenta @whitefireLightning Bolt rolled her eyes. Tickles and troubles? Really? And, knowing those two, the troubles were probably going to be worse than the other two ponies thought. And of course, typically enough, she had failed Equestrian History. "All right, let's get this over with." She muttered.
sstwins • 21 March 2013 at 12:09 PM
@sandstorm99 @ems @sstwinz @whitefire @magenta That's ok! Why don't you redo your post below this one, and enter the ballroom then? Then you can join our game show! "Welcome Midnight Shadow! Now, for our first question. Who was Celestia's only male student? Hint: He has his own branch in the Canterlot library. First pony to buzz in gets to answer!" Discord called, making magical buzzers appear in front of everypony on stage.
sstwinz • 21 March 2013 at 12:12 PM
@sandstorm99 @ems @sstwins @whitefire @magentaThis question was easy! Everypony knew the answer! Lightning buzzed in by tapping the buzzer with her hoof. "Starswirl the Bearded!" She pronounced proudly. Maybe this wouldn't be so bad after all!
eeveelutary • 21 March 2013 at 12:16 PM
@Sstwins When can I enter ? >.<
magenta • 21 March 2013 at 12:20 PM
@Sstwins Sorry one of my sides , anyways idk where to start O^O
sstwins • 21 March 2013 at 12:22 PM
@sandstorm99 @ems @sstwinz @whitefire @magenta"Correct!" Discord proclaimed. He produced a magic score board from no where with all the contestants names on it. Pepper flew up and tapped Lightnings name, causing a huge 1 to appear next to it. Then he produced magic feathers from the air and tickled Lightning for a few seconds."Now for our next question. What are the names of Celestia and Luna's parents? Hint: They both start with T."
magenta • 21 March 2013 at 12:36 PM
@Sstwins @Sstwinz @Whitefire @ Ems~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Lunar Storm trotted along the lanes of Ponyville her house was just a few more meters away .It was a worn down shack .She trotted into the old shack and looked at a picture of her family ,she had to avenge them . The chocolate rain had disrupted and contaminated all the crops on their farm , causing them to suffer from a terrible disease . Only she had survived .P.S Ponyville Vegetables + Chocolate Rain = Poisonous
whitefire • 21 March 2013 at 6:09 PM
Umberisk attempted to sit down, but only floated higher as she listened to the "Game show" that was going on. She still cowered slightly, though; she didn't have a good history with other ponies. She was frightened, but if she stayed quiet she'd go unnoticed. Finally her shifting worked, though at a time when she'd rather it hadn't, for as her cat form melted away a bright light flashed and revealed her mixed-up pony form: a gray holey horn swamped by a messy blue mane, which led down to a scarred white face that had gray-blue eyes flecked with green, which in turn led down to a scarred chest and legs, the left one of which was swathed in bandages; that in turn was connected to a white and scarred body with blue stripes down the length of it with tiny Changeling wings, leading up to a blue tail which tapered to a messy point.http://tinypic.com/r/110ekw6/6'Crap...' she thought. 'So much for unnoticed.'@SSTwins@SSTwinz@Magenta@EmsAnd... Erm... Anypony else in that room?
sstwinz • 22 March 2013 at 11:38 AM
@sandstorm99 @ems @sstwins Immortal Game refrence? 😊 @whitefire @magentaLightning was tickled with the feathers, causing her to close her eyes while she laughed. She thought she saw a flash of light while her eyes were shut, but wasn't sure. She opened her eyes just in time to hear the next question, "What are the names of Celestia and Luna's parents? Hint: They both start with T." Lightning buzzed in without even thinking. "Titan and-" What was her name??? Something to do with the earth... "And..." What was it????? "Umm..." Arrgh!!! Lightning resigned. Hopefully the trouble wouldn't be too bad. "Titan and Tulip." She said with a sigh, fully knowing that her answer was wrong.@whitefire Don't worry, I'm not ignoring you! I just wanted to answer this question! 😊
sstwins • 22 March 2013 at 12:02 PM
@magenta Cool, looks pretty good! Except, when did they die? Discord's only been here for about 1 day. Unless they died back when the mane 6 defeated him the first time@whitefire Great post! I liked your details!!@sstwinz Yup! 😉 Trouble will come soon.@sandstorm99 @ems"Wrong!" Discord exclaimed. He then turned away from Lightning. "One second though, it seems that we have another late competitor." He turned to the new mare and teleported her next to the others. "Now, what is your name?"
magenta • 22 March 2013 at 12:19 PM
@Sstwins They died the first time >.<
whitefire • 22 March 2013 at 3:54 PM
"What?! Um... Erm, I'm Umberisk..." Umberisk replied quietly, shying away as much as one could shy away when in a room with zero gravity."I guess that the answer to the question was Titan and Terra?" she offered timidly, hoping desparately that she was right.@SSTwins Thanks!@SSTwinz@Sandstorm99@Ems